teaching children to write sentences

teaching children to write sentences
Are these two sentences written correctly?

I have a research paper due tomorrow and i really need a 100 in english! Are these two sentences written correctly (commas?)

These classes were taught by paid teachers, as well as, volunteers.

Also, how should i reword this sentence?

The education wasn’t all that good, but they got free clothing and food.

The less poor didn’t want to donate money, or help them, because poor children stole items from shops.

“These classes were taught by paid teachers, as well as volunteers.”

“They got free clothing and food, but the education wasn’t all that good.” or “The education wasn’t all that good, but at least they got free clothing and food.”

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